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tacitsurrender
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Mistress Cleo (short story)

Hi, so I'm new here and I joined because I was looking for a place to share my stories. I'm very new at writing so please be gentle with the critique but advice and thoughts are very welcome. I hope you enjoy.

(note: non-explicit)
Mistress Cleo(revised)
by tacitsurrender

She looks at me; unwavering... those eyes pierce me as though she knows exactly who I am... what I am. My breath catches but she only blinks lazily and looks away. I feel empty, missing her stare immediately. I call out to her, try to temp her to me, desperate to get her attention again. I feel so pathetic but I don’t stop. She slowly turns her head and gives me another glance. She hears the need in my voice and decides perhaps there’s something there after all. Slowly, deliberately, she stalks over to me, her eyes never leaving me. I feel excitement and anticipation as she approaches. I hold out my hand in greeting but she elegantly steps past it. She circles slowly, surveying me. I can feel her eyes wonder over my body... I wish I knew what she’s thinking.

Slowly she lets me touch her. Just my finger tips in her hair. God it’s so soft! I wonder how anything could be this soft. She brushes past my hand again, this time inviting me to follow. I do, eagerly! When we’ve reached our destination she drops her guard a little and stretches. I watch her long, lean, beautiful lines. It’s marvellous how she extends out, back arching. I see the small traces of pleasure on her face and I release the breath I didn’t know I was holding. She turns to me again with a look I can’t quite decipher. Is she laughing on the inside? I watch as she lays down and with a single sound of her voice invites me to join her.

It’s heaven to feel her like this. She lets me run my hands over her sleek, impressive body. She lets me stroke her and sing my praises and admiration of her. She moves closer to me, almost onto my lap, I can feel her warmth around my legs. As I begin to relax she sinks her claws into the flesh of my thighs! A sharp breath in as I feel her nails dig deeper. They don’t break the skin... yet. She shows her amusement and repositions herself. As she makes her way up it becomes harder and harder to control my voice. She hits a sensitive spot and I cry out! Hisses of pain escape my lips to which she purrs her approval. I'm almost at my limit but it’s so wonderful to touch her, and she rewards my efforts with more sharp fistfuls of my thighs. On and on this pained pleasure continues until I’m begging for mercy! And just as I can’t take anymore, she finally she settles. I’m exactly where she wants me and with one final piercing stare she lowers her head and closes her eyes.

Her warmth washes over me, her breaths soft. I feel her relax into me, moulding to my shape. I keep my hands on her, I keep stroking, feeling, touching all I can. As she reaches satisfaction my skin breaks from the final efforts of her sharp attention! It’s nothing serious, just delightful markings to later explain. Now she’s had her fill I feel her slowly drift asleep. She’s a light sleeper and I stay still as not to disturb her. “I love you.” I whisper. My beautiful, beautiful cat!

lol I hope everyone enjoyed this story. This is an edited version of my earlier post. I'm much happier with this one, so thanks again for reading and for any constructive critiques. (Be gentle please!) They're much appreciated.


DrPepperSir
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I know a cat like this. I love the way you write.

TheWelshKnight
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I like this. It's well written and the concept is great, but I think you could be more subtle - the reader realises you are describing a cat too soon.

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